Huang Leyi (Cindy)

Dr. Marquardt

ENG 1430 W 10

May 14, 2015

                Outline

Introduce

A.    Fairy stories use marriage plot to ingratiate readers

B.     The reason why I disagree use marriage

(1)   Cinderella’s marriage is a reward, their love is too weak to happily ever after

(2)   Marriage without love cannot bring real happiness

(3)   Marriage plot has passive influence.

First topic love takes time and effort

A.    Quote to show love need time, they need to know each other.

B.     The love reply on appearance or wealth or social class is too weak to last

(1)   Example for fail love

C.     Draw a conclusion the love between Cinderella and prince is not true.

(1)   Identity by shoe

(2)   Just one night

Second topic Marriage without love cannot bring real happiness

A.    Quote to show steady relationship needs love

B.     No love, no care. Careless lead to loneness or sorrow

(1)   Example to show women want to free from the marriage

C.     Relationship need respect, no love no respect

(1)   The importance of respect

D.    Cinderella will not be really happily ever after

(1)   Since their love is weak, their marriage will finally run out of love

(2)   Cinderella depend on prince if love is gone, respect will gone

(3)   Loneness and sorrow may be the real end

Third topic marriage plot has passive influence

A.    Marriage was used as tool, but now it is different

B.     Marriage means success, passive influence

(1)   Analyze the readers’ age group, and analyze what marriage plot will send to them

C.     Women fight for fair

(1)   Women used to be appendant of men

(2)   Women fight for fair and pay a lot

(3)   Being passive is wasting the consequence

Rebuttal marriage can bring Cinderella steady life and marriage is an important part for live.

A.    Since marriage is important, readers shouldn’t receive the opinion that use marriage as tool

(1)   Refer to the passive influence

(2)   Marriage is a success for Cinderella not a real happiness

B.     Not only marriage can bring steady life

(1)   Marriage bring social status and wealth

(2)   Cinderella can also live stably without marriage

a.       Guess what the live will be if Cinderella did not marry prince

b.      Marriage is not for stable life

Conclusion don’t use marriage plot.  

                   Expansion:

Love takes time and effort

A.    Without enough time, people do not know each other enough which will lead to a result that people imagine their lovers too perfect that once time destroys their fancy for lovers which means they cannot understand each other or they cannot stand the lovers’ shortcoming, they may finally find that she or he is not the person they really love.  

B.     If someone think he or she fall in love with another, and they do not spend much time together to know each other, the most possible reason that lead them to fall into love is they are appealed by the good appearance of each other, however, human will get old and human always want something or someone new, so appearance can bring someone who is drawn into the beautiful or handsome appearance, but character can decide whether people can love each other.

C.     In Cinderella story, Cinderella and prince just stay with each other for one night, the time is so limited, how much they can know about another, even the prince cannot remember the appearance of Cinderella that he can only find Cinderella by shoe.

Marriage plot lead to passive influence.

A.    Marriage was used as a tool to get stuff such as wealth and upper class, but now marriage is not only a ceremony but also means sincere combination of people. Marriage plot tries to bring the old opinion to society.

B.     Marriage plot sends people a signal that women’s success depend on marriage, and also lead the girls to be passive: since marriage can bring success, why do they need to fight, their husbands can deal everything for them.

C.     In long history, women are always the appendant of men, social class is different between men and women, and women use quite a few time and much effort to fight the unequal society, if girls believe the marriage plot and depend on men, they are wasting the consequence that women used to fight.

Marriage without love cannot bring happiness

A.    Without love, people will not care about their partners and the careless can lead to loneness, much loneness cannot make people happily ever after, it can only bring crazy.

B.     Every relationship need respect, if the marriage without love, it probably lost respect too, people will not think for their partners if they don’t have any emotion.